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Does the sun not set on all creatures?
It's all a matter
of when and where.
Does one take a plane or car
to follow the sun?
Nay, lest it be a fruitless;
a futile endeavor.
But it remains that all must prepare
for the inevitable darkness.
Perhaps we shall learn
the beauty of the stars.
Eventually.
It's all a matter
of when and where.
Does one take a plane or car
to follow the sun?
Nay, lest it be a fruitless;
a futile endeavor.
But it remains that all must prepare
for the inevitable darkness.
Perhaps we shall learn
the beauty of the stars.
Eventually.
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One thought taken from a poem where I had mashed four thoughts together. I found this one most appropriate for me right now, so I decided to post it. Plus I'm officially supposed to be building a gallery, by popular (or..not so) demand!
Please critique it, I have not ever tried to revise it from its original condition, it's just copied and pasted from the slopped-together poem, and I think the idea may be nice to expound upon, make sound professional and/or at least fluid. So mark it up, ya'll!
And I put this under "Fixed" because I have no idea what any of those categories are except like ballad and such, and Spoken Word doesn't fit here because I have no musical intentions with this one.
Please critique it, I have not ever tried to revise it from its original condition, it's just copied and pasted from the slopped-together poem, and I think the idea may be nice to expound upon, make sound professional and/or at least fluid. So mark it up, ya'll!
And I put this under "Fixed" because I have no idea what any of those categories are except like ballad and such, and Spoken Word doesn't fit here because I have no musical intentions with this one.
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I love it do you remember me from chat? we chated breifly